You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

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Dear Sir, My name is Robert Smith, I am writing

this

letter regarding the

damaged

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damage

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made to my household chores by your company, Moving Limited while shifting my stuff to the new house. As per discussion with your branch

office

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all the stuff should be moved to a new place on 5th of March from Bayview to North York.

Although

, I had been receiving my items on time at my new location. But when I was unwrapping cartons

then

I found out there is a massive dent on

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the

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front door of the refrigerator

was

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that was

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bought by me just two months ago.

This

is not ending here, I was so furious when I saw that my newly gifted Television screen had cracked too. At the time of order

place

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your branch manager assured me that all my luggage will be safe and not happen any kind of damage. I would like to have a full inquiry about how

this

damage happened along with I need my

compensate

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for all those items.The possible reason for

this

kind of damage

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is are

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are

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lack

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the lack

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of supervising the cartons when they are packed to ensure

the

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apply

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safety.

Carelessness

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The carelessness

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of the labours that could break while loading or unloading from

tjhe

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the

truck. I would like to suggest that hope you hire a new quality assurance staff who will take care of

this

. I am sure you'll look into my suggestion will take action on that. Waiting for your prompt response.

Your

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Yours

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Sincerely, Robert Smith

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7 paragraphs

248 words

6.50

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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