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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of difgerente cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Music
 gives soul to universe, wings to mind and flight
to
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of
 imagination.
some
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Some
 people believe that
music
 is a good way of bringing people of all ages and cultures together.I fully agree with
statement
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the statement
 and plausible explanation will be given in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. To commence with nowadays, people have
hectic schedule
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a hectic schedule
hectic schedules
,
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,
so they rely too much on
music
 to keep themselves relax. There are different types of
music
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music, for
for
instance folk
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instance, folk
music
,
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,
classical
music
,
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,
etcetera
. So all people can listen to
music
 according to their choice
.
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.
Moving ahead, language is not a barrier in understanding and enjoying
music
,
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,
thereby it connects people who speak different languages with each other.
For instance
, India is a diverse country and every state has its own language and
culture but
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culture, but
 still they are connected with each other through
music
.
Moreover
,
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,
music
 has no limitations
,
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,
it enables people of different ages to have own taste of
music
 and styles.Nowadays, most of young people have
keen interest
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a keen interest
 in classical
music
 while geriatric people love listening pop songs.
Therefore
, it enables people of different ages to understand each other better. To conclude
,
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,
on the basis of aforementioned explanation
,
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,
music
 brings people of all ages and cultures together.

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