You kid school is going for a trip outside country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group ask questions about the trip why you want to join the group? how can you help?

Dear Mr.
Ahlawat
Suggestion
Allowed
, I am writing
this
letter with regards to Canada trip which your school is planning for
next
month. I want to know which all places will be covered in those 3 days' time and what all activity will be covered? Which age group children are allowed? Please tell me how’s the weather there in Canada so that I can decide my kid’s clothes
accordingly
. Actually, my son is only 6 years old, so I want to accompany my kid on
this
trip.
Moreover
, we enjoy each other company more than anything else, so if I will not accompany him, he may feel alone.
Furthermore
, I would like to mention that I am a doctor by profession so I may be a good help in case of any mis happening or if any medical help required for any children during the journey. Hope my all queries will be answered soon. Yours sincerely Manju Kumari

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