You kid school is going for a trip outside country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group ask questions about the trip why you want to join the group? how can you help?

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Dear Mr.

Ahlawat

Suggestion

Allowed

, I am writing

this

letter with regards to Canada trip which your school is planning for

month. I want to know which all places will be covered in those 3 days' time and what all activity will be covered? Which age group children are allowed? Please tell me how’s the weather there in Canada so that I can decide my kid’s clothes

accordingly

. Actually, my son is only 6 years old, so I want to accompany my kid on

this

trip.

Moreover

, we enjoy each other company more than anything else, so if I will not accompany him, he may feel alone.

Furthermore

, I would like to mention that I am a doctor by profession so I may be a good help in case of any mis happening or if any medical help required for any children during the journey. Hope my all queries will be answered soon. Yours sincerely Manju Kumari

Mon Aug 19 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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You kid school is going for a trip outside country for 3 days and parent is allowed to join the group ask questions about the trip why you want to join the group? how can you help?

Fully explain your ideas

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any other experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Some people think it is a better way to go abroad to work or study, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future . Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?