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Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Why do you think that is? Do you think job satisfaction is important?

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From the dawn of the time, most people allotted greatly of their time working. Throughout the history, a lot of researchers tried to come up with a definition and ways to achieve
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satisfaction
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. Being satisfied with
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's
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 is an integral part for you to have a happy life and great physical and emotional well-being.
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 will be proven on how
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satisfaction
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 differs from
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 individual and another. It is greatly affected by
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's definition of
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 and their expectation
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of
 the
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.
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 with, nowadays people's lives greatly depend on their income and benefits from their
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. Salary seems to be an essential element in considering their happiness and contentment to
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's
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. Another contributing element is the working environment. A healthy working environment consists of a good relationship between the employee and the employer, as well as their colleague,
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 has been an important role in attaining
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satisfaction
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.
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, without any doubt having a good time at
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 is
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 to take into consideration. To be more specific no
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 can be satisfied with their
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 if they are having an unhealthy relationship with their colleagues,
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 will definitely give them a lot of stress and will soon affect the person's
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 performance.
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 but not the least, career growth opportunity is
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one
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 of the elements to be considered to attain a
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greater
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satisfaction
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 that triggers the employee's happiness and making them realise their
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potential
. Apparently, there are so many contributing elements to attain
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satisfaction
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. But it is really possible for
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 to be satisfied with their
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? In my own point of view, I would definitely agree that
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 can be satisfied
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with
 their
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 depending on their definition of
satisfaction
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 and depending on their reasonable and attainable expectation on their
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. In my case, if I have to
dependent
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depend
 on my salary and benefits for my
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satisfaction
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 it will be certain that I'm unsatisfied with my current
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. As no
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 will be satisfied with their
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 if that will be their basis, because a good financial compensation and an excellent benefit
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are
have been
are being
 just a prize for all your hard
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.
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, working long hours and having a
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lower
 salary will be out of the picture if you will just learn how to love your
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 and enjoy what you are doing. To sum it up,
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 it is hard to be fully satisfied
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with
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's
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, it would be great if you will focus on the positive aspect of your
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 ad ignore the negative side of it, in order for you to achieve
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satisfaction
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 and happiness in life.
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