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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

#success #wealth #belongings #measure #person
Wealth
 is considered to be a primary goal
to
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for
of
 everybody.
However
,
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,
 measuring success through
wealth
 and material belongings is wrong
,
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,
 as
succces
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
 depends on the individual
persons
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person's
desire
 and personal issues. The requirements of self
satisfaction
,
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,
 less
desire
 and good health to make a person happy will
discussed
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discuss
 below
.
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.
To begin
 with
,
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,
 success cannot be measured through
wealth
 and
mateial
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
material
martial
 belongings
,
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,
 as
desire
 and personal issues varies according to the person.
For instance
, actor
robin
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Robin
williams who
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Williams, who
Williams who
Williams' who
 wealthy
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
sucide
the act of killing yourself
suicide
 due to the
dis
the feeling of being displeased and discontent
dissatisfaction
satisfaction
on
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with
life
 and career, as his
desire
 and mental
satisfcation
the contentment one feels when one has fulfilled a desire, need, or expectation
satisfaction
 required more than the
wealth
.
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.
 In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
 to that, personal issues like
conflit
an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)
conflict
 of interest among family will lead to the depression and mental stress
,
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,
 which can be solved through sensible conversation
reather
on the contrary
rather
 than
wealth
.
On the other hand
,
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,
 happiness and
satisfaction
 will make a person successful in
life
.
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Person
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The person
A person
 who finds happiness
,
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,
eventhough
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even though
 at his worst financial situation will lead his
life
 successful.
Likewise
,
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,
 Living
life
 with a meaning to make a change
on
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in
 others
life
 through helping them will consider as a successful
life
.
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.
 All things considered
,
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,
 the
satisfaction
 and
desire
 are
main key element
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main key elements
the main key element
a main key element
 that can be
hwlful
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
 to measure a
persons
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person's
 success
.
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.
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