In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Presently, there have been tremendous growth discovered in the
ecomony
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economy
of
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
country; the outcome of which is the an increase in the standard of living in developed cities than in the rural areas.
However
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However, this
this
current development may result to issues for the entire
nation
which is the
cux
the most important point
crux
of
this
paper. One of the main challenges is the issue of division. Division
depits
someone authorized to exercise the powers of sheriff in emergencies
deputies
disunity amount people and the likely consequence of
this
is war. Where a
nation
decides to favour some parts using the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
economy while neglecting the other parts, it raises a clear case of
marginalization
the social process of becoming or being made marginal (especially as a group within the larger society)
marginalisation
and hostility among
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
people, Nigeria is a good example of
this
where the government seems to favour a particular region more than the rest. Report has it that there has been
series
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a series
of agitations among citizens of
this
marginalized region in Nigeria. Again is an increase in death rate. The rural
areas
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area
residents will be exposed to hunger and
sacrcity
a small and inadequate amount
scarcity
of
resources eg
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resources, e.g.
resources e.g.
low energy supplies, bad water and bad road network preventing them from having access to medical treatments.
Nevertheless these
Accept comma addition
Nevertheless, these
challenges can be mitigated if the government distributes the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
resources equally across regions and encouraging proper utilization of these resources.
Also
the
nation's
Suggestion
nation
states can be made independent of the
federal thereby
Accept comma addition
federal, thereby
allowing states to amass the
nation
's resources to the benefit of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
citizens while remitting a certain percentage
to
Suggestion
of
the federal. Example is the United States of where the states are independent of the federal which in return brings about economic development in the different states.
Therefore
, for there to exist a harmonious country with
florishing ecomony
Suggestion
a flourishing economy
florishing economy
flourishing economy
flourishing ecomony
, the government should endeavour to carry every region along by equally distributing resources and minimize
centration
(physiology) a shortening or tensing of a part or organ (especially of a muscle or muscle fiber)
contraction
of the
nation
's economy within a particular area.
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