SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT LIBRARIES ARE A WASTE OF RESOURCES AND MONEY SO COMPUTERS SHOULD REPLACE THEM. HOWEVER, OTHERS DO NOT AGREE. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE OPINION

In comparison of Books and Computers , Books are manually read and computers are softwares ( electronics) installed
However
,
both
improves the knowledge of every individual, libararies has tons of fiction and non fiction books where any person can go and read in a peacefull envirnoment, It is easy access for any person who are not friendly with today's technology, as
this
proves that its not a waste of funds in investing in establishing of libraries,
therefore
it is a huge advantage as it doesnt work with automation
therefore
computers
also
play a important role in todays generation as it is easy acessibility where any questions can be easily found and personally people can manage their time management, computers has lots of softwares examples Ms.Office, Painting, social sites, Emails for
corespondence
communication by the exchange of letters
correspondence
, Job searching and other sites loaded for the betterment of fast learning in
future
Suggestion
the future
, according to my view
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
both
resources can be very useful as there are no
gurantee
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantees
grant
for technology as it call be disconnected and time due to poor system or loss of electricity. In
conlclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
, Environment needs
both
the
resourses
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
for peoples back up system.
both
Suggestion
Both
are very handy for every human being who needs to gain knowledge in every way, as building of libraries and involving computers in it can be much more efficient for every person.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • cultural hub
  • community engagement
  • digital divide
  • inequality
  • sustainable
  • affordability
  • technological advancement
  • information retrieval
  • hybrid resources
  • social interaction
  • evolution of libraries
  • complementary
  • access to information
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