SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT LIBRARIES ARE A WASTE OF RESOURCES AND MONEY SO COMPUTERS SHOULD REPLACE THEM. HOWEVER, OTHERS DO NOT AGREE. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE OPINION

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In comparison of Books and Computers , Books are manually read and computers are softwares ( electronics) installed

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improves the knowledge of every individual, libararies has tons of fiction and non fiction books where any person can go and read in a peacefull envirnoment, It is easy access for any person who are not friendly with today's technology, as

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proves that its not a waste of funds in investing in establishing of libraries,

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it is a huge advantage as it doesnt work with automation

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computers

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play a important role in todays generation as it is easy acessibility where any questions can be easily found and personally people can manage their time management, computers has lots of softwares examples Ms.Office, Painting, social sites, Emails for

corespondence

communication by the exchange of letters

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, Job searching and other sites loaded for the betterment of fast learning in

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the future

, according to my view

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resources can be very useful as there are no

gurantee

give surety or assume responsibility

guarantees

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for technology as it call be disconnected and time due to poor system or loss of electricity. In

conlclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

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conclusions

, Environment needs

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the

resourses

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

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for peoples back up system.

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are very handy for every human being who needs to gain knowledge in every way, as building of libraries and involving computers in it can be much more efficient for every person.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

224 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

repository
cultural hub
community engagement
digital divide
inequality
sustainable
affordability
technological advancement
information retrieval
hybrid resources
social interaction
evolution of libraries
complementary
access to information

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT LIBRARIES ARE A WASTE OF RESOURCES AND MONEY SO COMPUTERS SHOULD REPLACE THEM. HOWEVER, OTHERS DO NOT AGREE. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE OPINION

Include an introduction and conclusion

The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Human activities over the period of time have increased global warming. What are the primary causes? What solutions can you suggest?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?