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The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Both poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree. Gaining
admission
 into the university is supposed to be accessible to everyone irrespective of their financial
status but
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status, but
 a recent study has revealed that the rich find it easier to gain
admission
 because of their deep pocket and their children doesn't necessarily need to excel in the entrance exam.
This
 is a perspective I strongly agree
with
Suggestion
to
 view. There are some universities specifically designed for the rich. The facilities
such
 as the
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
 bus, lecture halls and laboratories are of world class
standard which
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standard, which
 cannot be afforded by low-income earners. Only the rich can afford these type of
univeristies
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
 for their wards. The school in turn needs these funds to maintain these facilities.
Also
, there is a system used for rating
univerisities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
 on a scale of 1- 100.
This
 rating system drives competition among
universities thereby
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universities, thereby
 raising the
admission
 criteria. Every University strives to be top ranking and in order to do
this
, they need funds
besides
 those allocated by the government. Internally generated revenue is one of the methods used for raising funds.
For example
, increasing the tuition
fee thereby
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fee, thereby
 making it more expensive for low-income earners to gain
admission
. In conclusion, there should be room for people with high intellectual capabilities easily gain
admission
. Initiatives
such
 as Financial Aid Programs, Scholarships
,
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,
 Work and Study Programs should be put in place so everyone irrespective of their financial standing can benefit from schooling.
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