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It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

#women #men
A happy family needs both care and money to survive. Many people believe that female parent is more needed than
male parent
Suggestion
a male parent
the male parent
 for upbringing of the
child
. I fully support the notion as she is more attached and takes care of feeding since the birth time, whereas
father
Suggestion
the father
 remains mostly out of sight for the job purpose. It is irrefutable to say that there is
more emotional attachment
Suggestion
a more emotional attachment
 between
mother
 and baby because
first baby
Suggestion
the first baby
 stays inside her womb and
then
 she is the one who feeds him for
next
 few years. Naturally, the baby will feel happy by just looking at the face of
person
Suggestion
the person
a person
 by whom
his
objective male pronoun, used to refer to a male human or animal
he
hunger
Suggestion
hungers
 getting fulfilled.
Moreover
, it has been seen that not only in
human but
Accept comma addition
human, but
 in other
animals’
Suggestion
animal
 species
also
 females take up the responsibility of their respective
child
.
For instance
, the puppies will run to their
mother
 and always try to stay with her.
Furthermore
, it is well-known fact that females are the one who stays back
at
Suggestion
in
 residence with the
child
 as males must go out to earn and fulfil the requirements to run the home. So, the females take up the charge of being
homemaker
Suggestion
a homemaker
 and take care of the
child
 by playing or indulging them in other activity that resulted in
strong bond
Suggestion
a strong bond
 between both them.
As a result
, the
child
 finds it easy to go to his
mother
 in case of any trouble or necessity. To conclude, the toddler’s requirements can be fulfilled more by
mother
Suggestion
mothers
 rather than his father.
Father
Suggestion
A father
The father
 plays key role in protecting them from all the outside world.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • child-rearing
  • caregiver
  • social constructs
  • nurturing
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • paternity leave
  • co-parenting
  • development
  • economic pressures
  • primary caregiver
  • gender biases
  • fluidity of roles
  • societal norms
  • inherent differences
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