Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that accepting the worse situations like money shortage and imbalanced job is good.
However
, many other people believe that it is better to use those bad situations as your
opportunity
and encouragement to move
further
in
life
.
Although
, ups and downs are part of our
life
and it is good to accept the
failure
, I strongly believe that one should not stop moving
further
and take
this
failure
as an
opportunity
to improve yourself. Some people believe in fate
this
much, that they feel it is good to accept failing in exams, loss of job, etc., in
life
. They think that everything is destined by a god.
As a result
, they not even try or improve their situations.
For instance
, one of my friends got failed from 10 grade, after which he didn't even try to improve his situation and
consequently
he left his studies. The main reason of not trying again was that he thinks that it is destined that he is not able to do studies. In my opinion, the
failure
must be accepted as a golden
opportunity
to make the significant change in
life
.
For instance
, many scientists
such
as Einstein, Armstrong, etc.., and entrepreneurs like Steve Jobs has undergone through major failures at some stage in their lives.
However
, they accepted their
failure
as an
opportunity
to move
further
and explore more their
failure
situations.
In addition
, they not only conquered their fate, but
also
made history in the world with their unbelievable work. In conclusion, the only person who makes the destiny is the person himself. Everything will get destined in the way you do the hard work.
Although
, accepting failures is good, making
failure
as a destiny will destroy one's
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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