There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?

Personal Statement I always think of studying abroad as a wonder packed experience, one should expect loads of cultural encounter, professional exposure and amazing personal development. When I decide to apply for admission at Arden
University
, I see to it that I am going to take the study program that, in some way can build on my potential to compete with the fast pace
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
world. Studying Engineering
Management
in Arden
University
can definitely challenge me on a personal level. I know that it would have a major impact to my personal. It will challenge my language skills and my ability to live independently whether I consciously realize it or not, I for sure will develop a greater self-confidence, independence, and self-reliance. I choose to study Master in Engineering
Management
because
at
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on
the basis of every establishment, Engineering
Management
is the core that drives ideas into becoming a tangible reality. I want to be engaged in the process of creation, and I want to be on top of every detail. I have always dreamt of becoming an expert in my field, and being in an international platform is an opportunity to be recognized as an expert and a leader. My chosen
university
which is Arden
University
is the place where I can achieve my academic and personal goals. It is the perfect platform to pursue my desired master degree. An internationally recognized
university
will certainly equip and prepare me for a global and international work environment. It cares more about learning to increase understanding and knowledge. For that
reasons
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reason
, I can expect much more of a lecture format to my classes, class discussion and participation and loads of one-on-one interaction with my professors.
Therefore
, the flexibility of their curriculums gives me more freedom to explore my own interests within a course and make myself more socially and economically relevant in the society. It has a long standing reputation in the international marketplace. And
lastly
but not the least, it is one of the best
university
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universities
in
management
and is consistently amongst the country’s top ranking
university
. I studied Engineering
Management
in Khurasan
University
, and graduated with a Civil Engineering degree in 2015. I had an in-depth focus on subjects
such
as construction methods and construction
management
. I have
also
attended project
management
workshops, trainings, seminars and learned many
management
skills from online resources.
Besides
, I believe that I am a good manager by nature, my innate inclination towards
this
field inspired me to choose my career in engineering
management
. Career wise, I have worked as a project officer and was soon promoted to an assistant manager, and currently working as a project manager. My personal experience has been in projects outside of my work environment in rural development projects in my hometown. Another benefit I can get while studying Master in Engineering
Management
is
wider job prospect
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a wider job prospect
. Nowadays, Employers' job vacancy details often refer to them when they advertise the positions available. Employers actively seek graduates who have spent time studying abroad because they want employees with an international knowledge based on foreign language skills. The same international skills that make me more marketable for employment include communication skills, analytical skills, teamwork, flexibility, an understanding of cultural contexts, the ability to adapt to new circumstances and deal with differences, a developed view of the world outside the Afghanistan independence, and self-confidence, which for sure I would be able to acquire during studying Engineering
Management
in Arden
University
. Through
this
course, not only I benefit as an individual, my satisfaction and sense of achievement will come from the efforts I will dedicate to improve my country in areas
such
as infrastructure. I would
also
like to share my expertise with young engineers who have the potential to excel in
this
field. Thank you for taking the time to look into my application and for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Inayatull
ah Mohib
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