In some countries quality of life in large cities is decling. Why do you think is happening? What measures can be taken to step it ?
It is considered that the
quality
of life
of people is decreasing in the tremendous amount in large cities. This
essay will discuss about the some
reason responsible for closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
this
type of incidence and also
about the strategies which can be carried out to solve this issues
.
To commence with, in large cities like Myanmar, Suggestion
this issue
these issues
kathmandu
, Delhi and others the people are experiencing a low the capital and largest city of Nepal
Kathmandu
quality
of life
because of traffic congestion. Due to increase number of population, the proportion of vehicles in the cities are raising
. Suggestion
is raising
As a
result there
Accept comma addition
result, there
are
more traffic problem in cities. Suggestion
is
Secondly
, people are being deprived of healthy life
because of environment
Suggestion
environmental
pollution
. In addition
, environment
pollution
Accept comma addition
pollution, such
such
a as air pollution
, soil pollution
, water pollution
occurs due to presence of exhaust fumes from industry factories or vehicles, emission of gases and waste product. For instance
, urban sprawl is one of major problem
as the people are constructing the Suggestion
the major problem
buiding
and industries by destroying the natural habitats which are directly affecting the healthy environments.
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
However
, the government
and individuals both
play a crucial role to improve Accept comma addition
individuals, both
quality
of life
. Firstly
, government
should make strong legislation and awareness programme to protect the natural environments. Suggestion
the government
For example
; charge should be apply
to those who destroy the forest or build the house or factories without the permission of Suggestion
should apply
should be applied
government
. Suggestion
the government
Also
, the government
should focus to shift the people to another free space places by providing same facilities
as in previous one. Suggestion
the same facilities
Secondly
, there should be improve in public transportation so
the private Accept comma addition
transportation, so
vehicles
number will decrease which control the Suggestion
vehicle
vehicles'
environment
Suggestion
environmental
pollution
. Thirdly
, people should follow rule
and regulations and make Suggestion
rules
themselves
aware about the management of waste products.
To sum up, there is no doubt that the main reasons of objective case of they
them
degradating
the Suggestion
degrading
degradation
degraded
quality
of life
is traffic congestion and environment
Suggestion
environmental
pollution
. To get rid from
Suggestion
of
this
type of problem to improve the life styles
of people a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
government
should concerned
Suggestion
concern
on
updating strong legislation and awareness programme. Suggestion
about
with
Also
, pupil need
to be actively engaged to make the Suggestion
needs
government
programme successful.Submitted by ritabhuju on
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