It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Every child should
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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
Be
able to distinguish between good and bad at an early age and if at all they fail in doing so than they can be taught
this
by punishing them Children in their early age are not having knowledge of what is good or bad for them and
therefore
commits
mistake
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mistakes
a mistake
.
This
mistakes
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mistakenly
mistake
helps them to learn about new things and experience which will be helpful to them in their later life.Their mind is like wet cement and making them understand love and affection is going to have
an
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a
lasting impact and
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the body of faculty and students at a university
university
.If
that is
done by giving him harsh lessons than it might create a negative impact I disagree with the statement because in the early stages of
life making
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life, making
children understand in a friendly manner has
lot more advantages
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a lot more advantages
than punishing him.
Although
I believe that if he is repeating that mistake making it a habit than we should use punishment as a remedy.
Furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
is the responsibility of parents to some extent that they realise a child about what is going to benefit and what is harmful for him.
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Any
opinion
,
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,
tutors and parents should use the methods which do not have a detrimental
effects
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effect
on a child's mind and along with that he understands what they are
trying to convey him
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trying to convey to him
.It should be in a lovely manner rather than scolding them.They should use good
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in day to day activities as children are keen observers and they learn quickly just by seeing so it can be used as a tool.
Lastly
punishments should be in accordance with wrong doings. To conclude.It is hard for children to differentiate between good and bad and they are not even aware of it.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
whenever they do
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quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
good stuff they must be admired so that they remember it and scientific studies have shown that when we are praised in
presence
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the presence
of anyone than our mind remembers it for a long time and if they do any wrong things than they must be made aware and should be explained to him that how it is bad for him
instead
of speaking badly with or punishing him in public.

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