Some people say rich countries should help poor countries with food and clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

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It is believed that the country which are developed should provide

food

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and clothes for the poor countries. I agree with

this

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statement but

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statement, but

it’s should not be mandatory.

This

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essay will discuss why poor countries need

food

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and clothes from rich countries.

Firstly

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, the countries which are poor need financial support to enhance their lifestyles. If the rich countries support them by clothes and

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food

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food, then

then

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they can live their life as we all know without

food

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clothes life is not possible.

For instance

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, American is helping every year by providing

food

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and clothes to Indian people living in Bihar which obviously helpful for needy people.

Hence

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, for

livihood

the financial means whereby one lives

livelihood

everybody need

food

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and clothes, so it’s really benefits to poor people.

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, it’s should not be

compulsary

required by rule

compulsory

as it makes the people dependent on rich countries. Rather than depending on

other they

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others, they

others they

have to learn to be independent so they can be given financial help to run any small

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

businesses

as their capabilities.

For example

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, financial help in farming, animal husbandry which

motivate

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motivates

people yo be self dependent and work hard. Even though

food

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and clothes are useful for them the financial help to run any

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

, as it will provide them

food

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and shelter every time they want. To sum up, I agree if rich country

provide

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provides

food

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me shelter will obviously

helpful but

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helpful, but

it’s should not be mandatory. Despite of that if poor people run business with some financial help they can improve their lifestyle.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

248 words

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