Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Sam, I’m writing to let you know that, I quit my old job and found something interesting. As you very well knew I was fed up with the desk job at

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IT firm, I’ve

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decided to leave my desk behind to follow my passion. A few months back, I had realized that clicking photos make me happy and it keeps me on my toes for any new adventure. It is always a lovely moment around when I’m out on a photography tour. I’ve recently moved to Bangalore to get trained by an international photography job and

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working as a part-time photographer in his firm. There is always a fun environment around the fellow photographers here as they never miss to capture any interesting moment which

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creates

memory

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for the lifetime. I’ve already learnt a lot of interesting and new tricks and tips from my mentor and I am hoping it to be a

fun filled

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journey ahead as I have started liking him. I am planning to propose

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mentor and I couldn’t hide it from you. We recently happened to cover a destination wedding and

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is the

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time I got to work with him closely. After the

shoot

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we both happened to spend some time on the beach nearby and

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when I felt like I skipped a beat looking at him but I had not shared my feelings

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him. Now that I have gathered some courage I’m planning to ask him out on a date. I will be visiting you after a couple of weeks and

hopefully

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I will have a success story bout the secret date which I will share with you over a few drinks. Looking forward to meeting you. Jane

Fri Aug 23 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

294 words

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The Closing

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