Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is always argued that
job
with
high
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higher
wages is more advantageous than a
job
that is
reaally
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
appealing. I strongly disagree with
this
satement
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
and I believe
job
satisfaction
is much more important than salary.
Firstly
,
job
satisfaction
provides
sense
Suggestion
a sense
of fulfilment and happiness. Even though a
person
earns
lot but
Suggestion
a lot, but
a lot but
does not like the
job
he is doing,
then
he is not really living his life.A
person
with money motivation is always
less happier
Suggestion
less happy
than a
person
with
job
satisfaction
.
For
example many
Accept comma addition
example, many
scientists and researchers are
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
in their career because of the
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
and
satisfaction
that they
get doing their
Suggestion
get their job done
get done their job
job
. That's why it is important to choose a
job
that provides
job
satisfaction
over salary.
secondly
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Secondly
, A satisfying
job
will make a
person
work passionately and lead him to career growth. Only a satisfying
job
will drive a
person
to achieve things, a
person
who does a
job
for the sake of money won't reach higher levels in his career.
For
instance J
Suggestion
instance, J
.K
rowling
English author most famous for the Harry Potter fantasy books (born 1965); the first person earning enough from writing books to become a US dollar billionaire
Rowling
quit her IT
job
and
sarted
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
started
to write novels out of her own
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
and now she is the highly paid authors in England. That's why passion leads to perfection and success in life. To conclude, I
stongly
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
believe
job
satisfaction
is more important because it gives
satisfaction
and success in life.

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  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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