Rich countries give money to poorer countries but it does not solve the problem of poverty.Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree

The world is combination of

conuntries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

, each one has their own

existance

the state or fact of existing

existence

existences

. They are

devided

separated into parts or pieces

divided

into three categories, rich countries, poor countries and developed countries.

Few decades

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A few decades

back developed countries are

also

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in the category of poor countries but they have developed and make

growth which

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growth, which

help them to consider them as developed countries. Many rich countries are contributing to the poor countries to make them

growth

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grow

and come-up to make a step with other countries. Which can help poor countries to invest

these fund

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these funds

this fund

in a way to boost their economy, but somehow the objective is not getting fulfilled. Rich countries are providing money as well as training in some fields, but poor countries have to develop the young talent and skills too and give them a chance to shine the country. Young talent should work for their country after getting skill and use for their countries. Apart from rich countries,

develped

being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful

developed

countries can

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play an important role to develop poor countries. They can shake

hand

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hands

with poor countries and grow them with. Providing financial support is not the only way to help

ppor

deserving or inciting pity

poor

countries, developed countries can provide skilled man power, to manage and grow local community in story of

poor country

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poor countries

a poor country

the poor country

. In my opinion, we can grow together with the help of each other and developed countries which

are already gone

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have already gone

are already going

already go

through

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phase can understand and handle the situation very well. So I strongly agree with that the developed countries can really help to poor countries to grow with the world.