Most people enjoy holidays and the travel and tourism is a billion dollar industry. All over the world people are traveling either for business or pleasure or both. People who can afford to or have free time go away frequently for short holidays or on weekends. Others who are working or studying try to take a holiday at least once a year, away from home and work or studies. What are the benefits of travel? Give good reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

It is true that in many countries the number of people who travelling for business or leisure or both has creased s
ignificant
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significantly
over recent years. There are reasons which can be identified to a
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account
for
this
trend and travellers undoubtedly benefit from the chance to
travel
more frequently and to visit even the most far-flung destinations. There are two important factors help to explain why more and m
ore people enjoy to
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more people to enjoy
more people enjoy
the things in short or l
onger
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long
length
travel
which they could have before.
Firstly
, in modern life citizens face many problems or stress each day, by avoidance work or home in short period time that m
y
expresses possibility
may
help them recover energy to living c
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continuum
Secondly
, competition among tour operators and visa’s policy h
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has decreased
the cost of travelling. Only a few decades ago,
for example
, low cost airlines as TRANSAVIA or Air Asia did not exit, but now they are used by millions of passengers each year. They can buy a return ticket from Ha Noi to Paris cost only 500 US $
instead
of 2000 US $ as normally. In my view, in the case of both domestic and international
travel
, there are clear advantages for travellers. People now have a wide choice of places to go and things to see and do. They are now able to experience other parts of their own countries or to enjoy the richness of unfamiliar and, sometimes, exotic destinations.
For instance
, Viet Nam is extremely popular with tourists from over the world, included America. V
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The visitor
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njoy
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enjoys
not only the c
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cuisine, but
also
the rich historical heritage of Viet Nam temples and tradition culture. Another advantage for many people now
that is
less costly, is the chance to reunite with family member who move abroad because of work, study or s
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simply
in search of better life. Family relationship can be maintained and strengthened thanks to the greater opportunities to
travel
. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that there are obvious advantages of travelling.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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