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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people possess the opinion that
newcomer
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newcomers
the newcomer
a newcomer
 should adapt with that concerned
to
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with
customs
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the customs
 and traditions of
place
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a place
the place
to begin
new life
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a new life
 there. I totally agree with that. New habitants may be forced to face many hardships if they do not follow regulations of society in
new place
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a new place
the new place
new places
.
First
 of all, they
can not
can not
cannot
 blend in
new environment
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a new environment
the new environment
new environments
. For distance, a businessman move to live in
foreign
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a foreign country
the foreign country
country
 and start business have to consider how people there do business. There are lots of risks, not only include the
laws but
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laws, but
 how to pull in and keep their customers.
Secondly
, they may break the rules if they do not appreciate the
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 and the traditions which was made by people who have lived here for
long time
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a long time
.
For example
: in Singapore, people looks like gross and not elegant if they discharge waste on the street or spit the gum in publicity. There are lots of advantages for foreigners if they allow themselves
getting
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to get
 used
to
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in
 the cultures of the
country
 where they settle. The
fist
the first or highest in an ordering or series
first
 one is local people would be more friendly if they feel that newcomer appreciate their lifestyle. The appear of neat tie with local habitants can lead to more understanding each other. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 advantage is that the experience they deal with different perspectives of rural customs and traditions may help them easier to fit in and get rid of being alone.
In
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At
 national events, they can feel that they belong to
this
 new
country
. In conclusion, I think that the
understand
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understanding
 of customs and traditions of
new
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new countries
a new country
country
 for
newcomer
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newcomers
the newcomer
 is essential in order to live in
new society
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the new society
a new society
.
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