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In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree?

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As you go on higher positions, the
salary
 gets bigger. In my point of view, I
agree the statment that
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agree with the statement that
agree the statement that
agree the statements that
 people with more
experience
 gets higher
salary
.
This
 is due to their experiences in the field and performance of their work. According to the Government rules,
company
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the company
 follows
few rules
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a few rules
 to provide the
salary
 to the working people.
Also
, the big
corporates
 have
few more rules
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a few more rules
 to pay their employees. All the rules mostly based on their work
experience
 and the skills which they have possessed. Most of the companies will follow the same pattern. There will be few exceptions based on their skills,
the younger
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the young
 person
get
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gets
 more
salary
 than the
experience
. Consider the above statements, the senior positions
gets
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get
 higher
salary
 because of their
experience
 in the work as well as the leadership
experience
 like managing the people efficiently.
Also
, the senior people in the company faced many hard
situtation
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situations
situation
 and they know how to resolve without affecting the companies and their
employees but
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employees, but
 the young people may not faced the situation as their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
 is just started or very less
experience
. The young worker will have more energy to
accombalish
put in effect
accomplish
 the
tasks but
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tasks, but
 they might not have patience to decide which one is the correct solution. So, in my opinion, I agree that the senior position will get higher salaries than the young workers in the same company are perfectly
correct
Accept comma addition
correct, however
however
 if the young worker has more knowledge and updated skills, he deserved to be paid more
salary
.

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