Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children.

Families

are having

Suggestion

were having

less children comparing to a few centuries ago. Parents able to provide more resources, including materials, love and time to their children.

However

, unlimited resources

does not always lead

Suggestion

do not always lead

to better children, as in many counties,

student

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

behaviours

in school are having server problems. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss one of the causes of these kind of

student

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, and

also

solutions

Suggestion

solution

I suggest that might able to resolve these

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

. As stated in the previous paragraph, schools are facing serious problems with

student

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

no matters where the school is located globally. I believe one of the biggest reasons is, nowadays, parents provide more than enough resources to their children in a prolonged period, which created an environment that children believe they can have whatever they want, whenever they like, just by asking, or do not even have to ask, no matter what it is. Think about what will happen when a

student

is unhappy because another

student

said something bad to him, he can just try to go push the other

student

down without even thinking about the consequence

Accept space

Students living in

such

environment

causes

Suggestion

cause

they failed to considerate others, and having just 10 percents students behave like that in class

also

affect other

students

Suggestion

students'

student

student's

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in class. It has to be noticed that providing unlimited resources to your children is not always a bad thing, but providing correct way to interact with peers, being a considerate human are as important as giving any physical materials a

children

Suggestion

child

needed. Letting your children understand what is the effect of his own actions, how his actions can affect his peers is the

first

step to provide a correct way for him to learn how he should react in a social environment. Helping your children

to learn

Suggestion

learn

and understand

this

can let him understand what he should have done even in an

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

situation. All things considered, schools are facing serious problems with

student

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. More than enough resources

Suggestion

are

one of the reasons that causes create the problems of the

student

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. And providing a correct value of should be able to help teachers and families to tackle some of the

behavioral

of or relating to behavior

behavioural

problems in school.

Mon Aug 26 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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373 words

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educational programs
diverse cultures
entertainment options
language skills
critical thinking
social awareness
shared experience
sedentary lifestyle
inappropriate content
academic performance
attention problems
social skills
commercial influence
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