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Nowadays,more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive development?

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In the salad days of millennium, social media become an irrefutable platform to raise
voice
Suggestion
a voice
 for social causes. In present scenario, masses use online
mode
 of
communication
 to connect socially. In my opinion, it is a positive trend. To set wheel in the motion by looking at why I believe, it is an added
benefit to keep in
Suggestion
benefit to keep
 touch with near and dear by e-
communication
mode
.
Firstly
, in
this
 fast paced world no one has enough time to meet with their
friends but
Accept comma addition
friends, but
 the current development of technology
make
Suggestion
makes
 it easy to connect with each other.
In addition
,
this
 is an affordable
mode
 of
communication
 for those who are not able to travel to their loved one.
Finally
, social media transform
whole world
Suggestion
the whole world
 into a small village in which everyone can communicate with their family and friends without much care about
distance
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the distance
. For an instance, people often use social media to show their love, affection and
also
 raise some issue for society welfare.
Consequently
, online
communication
bring
Suggestion
brings
world
Suggestion
the world
 closer, where every one
communicate
Suggestion
communicates
 easily. Turning to the other side of
argument
Suggestion
the argument
, some people think that face to face is the best
mode
 of socialization because during in person meeting gestures play a significant role to express thoughts.
Moreover
, facial expression and body
language represent the
Suggestion
language to represent the
 real concern in the mean time.For an example, on social media people often get notification about someones birthday and they just send a template message and do not care to wish them personally, since if a person wish his dearest by visiting in person
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 value a lot for him. In conclusion,
although
 online
mode
 of
communication
 has
few issue
Suggestion
a few issues
few issues
 which need to discuss, I believe that advantages of social
communication
 via online
mode
 in terms of time-saving and affordability eventually outweigh any negatives.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social media platforms
  • online interactions
  • virtual communication
  • global community
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • cyberspace
  • virtual presence
  • social networking
  • mental wellbeing
  • digital literacy
  • safe spaces
  • marginalized groups
  • face-to-face communication
  • socialisation
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