Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

There are several workplaces where using a uniform is an obligation. While wearing the same clothes every day can be less stressful, I believe that a worker should have the opportunity to dress up what is his desire. The main advantage of using similar clothes for each day of work is because it will lead to lower levels of stress. Not only because the employee will not have to worry about mix and match clothes
daily but
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daily, but
also
there is not the risk of being judged in terms of his clothes' taste.
For example
, from my personal experience, at work, I must use a uniform and I realized that my stress level decrease due to the fact that I did not need to
overthink
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over think
about what I will wear for that workday.
However
, I believe that do not have the opportunity to choose what to dress will interfere with what we are and what we want to convey to the world. One of the disadvantages of wearing stipulated clothes is that a person cannot express his way of thinking and living. If an individual is really creative and likes to express himself and his personality putting certain clothes on, He should have that right.
As a result
, He will feel that has the power in choosing how to introduce himself to other people.
For example
, The Guardian has conducted a study which revealed that people choose their clothes as a way to express what they are feeling and what they pretend to transmit to others.
Therefore
, I believe that regardless of our job we ought to be the right to choose what we desire to put on, taking into account our personality. In conclusion,
although
using a uniform is more practical, leading to less stress, it is my opinion that all workers should decide what to wear as a form of expressing their personalities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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