Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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internet
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where I sat and wonder how generations before Suggestion
occasions
occasion
internet
survive and I couldn't find a better answer to it.
I will go by listing some salient points to defend why the advantages of buying things online outweigh the disadvantages.
I will Use synonyms
first
and foremost use myself as an example. In 2015 when I got a job in Linking Words
rural area
, it was so hard for me to see the things I used to buy when I was in the urban area. One of the only option left for me is to make orders online for Suggestion
rural areas
a rural area
anyuthing
I need and get an indefinite thing
anything
deleived
to my house.
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delivered
such
as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming Linking Words
order
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the comfort of their homes and office without the stress of thing Suggestion
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how to get it after Suggestion
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an
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so much comfort that comes with making orders online Suggestion
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book
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later
book
the flight and it was done at the comfort of my home through online. I imagine how it will have been if the Use synonyms
internet
was not available to make Use synonyms
such
order. I have seen Linking Words
may
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many
lossing
their jobs/contract fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
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loosing
as a result
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being
book
their flight.
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also
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the market, groceries or travel to go to see a place, as for entertainment
visit
book
for a ticket can be Use synonyms
use
for other productive things.
In conclusion, I agree that buying things online has many advantages.
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