Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say – Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished. – Suggest a future use for this building. – Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with respect to the destruction of an old building in my vicinity. The

structure

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stands as a memorable scene to us in our community

,

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and could serve as a tourist centre later. Moreso, financial support should be required from the government to fix some damages.

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building brings a lot of

memmory

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memory

to

we

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our

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residents. The building

being

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the

first

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of its kind in my area since 1972 about 40 decades ago, makes us

to

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remember the ancient story about human trafficking in Africa, a history which can not be forgotten in our generation, and that which is yet to come as the story will be passed from one

descendants

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to another.

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, the building brings much popularity to our

environ

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as many people now carry out research on the old

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. People like to see ancient buildings,

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structure

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could serve as a tourist attraction to visitors. The income gained from tourist who pays a visit to the ancient

structure

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could be

use

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for basic amenities development in the area

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as

elctricity

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electricity

, gas, infrastructural and educational growth.

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, as

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people travel down to the city so as to see the old building, they are equally promoting the growth of the nation through the money gained from their flight ticketing and hotel reservations. Messages could be sent to the governmental parastatals for financial support. A mail could be sent to the Minister of Historical Affairs soliciting

for

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monetary aid to bring to normal the state of the

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, and the Mayor of the community

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should not be left out of

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building will not be broken down as it means a lot to us in the community. Yours faithfully, Oyeleke Victor