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Many people believe that playing video games is a waste of time and can even have a negative effect on the health of players. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Many people presume that playing video games is a waste of time and it even deteriorates their mental and physical health. I too agree on
this
 point some extent. Due to
globalization students
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globalization, students
 has access to
variety
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a variety
the variety
 of games these days.
firstly
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Firstly
, it
is giving
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gives
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on their studies as they tend
spend
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to spend
 much time on playing these games rather than concentrating on their career.
Secondly
, few games are creating stress and misleading the people.
For example
, recently many people were victimized due to Pubg Game and it killed many people. Few governments
also
 banned these types of wild games.
Moreover
, some games encouraging the people to make a crime and misleading their thoughts. Olden days we had many games and by playing them people have refreshed their mindset and they give the ability to improve the analytical skills. There were healthy
competetions
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
 between people who plays it. With the advancement of technology, new devices are coming with
variety
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a variety
 of options to the video game players.
whenever
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Whenever
 they get
sometime
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some time
 during commutation or any other
leisure
of less size or importance
lesser
 period they are opening the mobile from their pocket and started playing. Due to
this
 people are not recognizing what is happening around them and
this
 way they are not maintaining the healthy relationships with their family members and friends. In conclusion, video games are creating negative impact on the human life and everyone should be cautious about the playing games as they will not give any benefit except the waste of time.
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