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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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In these decades, people are more
concern
Suggestion
concerned
 about
education
.
Education
 is trusted as a weapon for most people to have better lives. There are some other benefits we can gain from
education
 through attending universities as facilitators for
education
 level improvement. In my opinion, entering universities is a challenge that most people would rather taking, because of numerous promising reasons that they believe will guarantee their
education
 levels in the future. In general, people want to attend universities to increase their
education
 level by improving their prior knowledge. Their knowledge can be improved by learning new skills in the universities through their experiences in working some projects related to their major.
In addition
, these experiences are related to theoretical learning, and more importantly, practical learnings. In jobs, both theoretical and practical skills are really important. In the job vacancies, we often see some requirements for several positions. Those requirements are usually skills that we gained in the universities. More importantly, big companies usually include
degree requirement
Suggestion
a degree requirement
the degree requirement
degree requirements
 for their employers. Skills and
degree
 are things that we receive in the universities.
Moreover
, beside job requirements and
education
 levels, degrees that we receive from the universities can make our society levels better. Our
degree
 can be widely used as an indicator of our
education
 level.
For example
, an employee who has
master’s
Suggestion
a master’s degree
degree
 will have
better job position
Suggestion
a better job position
 than those who only have
bachelor’s
Suggestion
a bachelor’s degree
bachelor’s degrees
degree
. Position in jobs will affect the amount of salaries and incomes. In conclusion, people attend universities because of
benefits
Suggestion
the benefits
 they will get, related to their
lives
Suggestion
life
life's
 quality including jobs and social status.
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