Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (such as the environment). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Public
transport
has become a basic necessity in small as well as
big cities. Many people
believe that the
governments should work on improving Correct article usage
apply
transport
mediums and invest in rapid transport
vehicles. In my opinion, I think every person wants affordable
and comfortable journey so regulators must spend some budget amount to develop Correct article usage
an affordable
transport
facilities. This
essay will discuss, why some people
think it is advantageous, and others not
find it beneficial.
To start with, if faster public Change the verb form
do not
did not
transport
available
, Add a missing verb
is available
then
people
might prefer it rather than using their own vehicle which will eventually lead to less traffic in the city. To state an example, after Delhi
metro inception in city, Correct article usage
the Delhi
majority
of Delhi's citizens have stopped using personal cars to travel Correct article usage
the majority
instead
now
they use Rephrase
apply
metro
to reach their Add an article
the metro
destination
. Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
Additionally
, if less traffic is there in any city then
pollution will be reduced. For example
, significant improvement was observed in air quality when Delhi authorities had
applied Unnecessary verb
apply
odd-even
rule which was to ban even Correct article usage
the odd-even
numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
number
Change preposition
of car
car
on even Fix the agreement mistake
cars
date
and odd number Fix the agreement mistake
dates
cars
on odd dates. Change preposition
of cars
Furthermore
, rapid transport
will reduce travel time, thus
people
's travelling to office will be hassle free
.
Add a hyphen
hassle-free
Nevertheless
, there are many compelling reasons why some people
think that transport
facility
should not be given top priority by the authorities. Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
Such
people
believe that other basic amenities like education, environment and medical
should be the higher priority as they will affect the masses. And if better medical facilities are provided in government hospitals Replace the word
medicine
then
people
will not have to splurge their money in private hospitals. Similarly
, education is one such
area which should not be ignored.
In conclusion, the government should keep investing in this
area to make transportation easily available and affordable while
taking care of other departments too.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
Provide specific examples to support your points
coherence and cohesion
There is a good use of linking words, but the organization can be improved for better coherence
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely
grammatical range
Work on sentence structure and grammar to avoid errors