Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

what
Suggestion
What
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
know is, in
today’era
, more people
are prefereing
Suggestion
prefer
are preferring
are preparing
to be self
emplyoed
having your services engaged for; or having a job especially one that pays wages or a salary
employed
than doing
job
Suggestion
the job
.
This
has both merits and demerits. But no, as per my knowledge pros of doing
business
not overcome the cons of it. I have
further
explaination
a statement that makes something comprehensible by describing the relevant structure or operation or circumstances etc.
explanation
explanations
expansion
to support my answer which is mentioned below.
to
Suggestion
To
commence with, Doing
business
has more profits in
compare
Suggestion
comparing
to
being one more than one
two
jobs.
Firstly
, as being self-employed
,
Accept space
,
one can have freedom to choose work hours as per his or her
convience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
conscience
.
Thus
, person can be enthusiastic and do more work which leads to more earnings. On the opposite, If one is doing
job
Suggestion
the job
a job
, so he is bound to time as per company or office policy
thay
people in general
they
that
have to be at work from 8 am to 4 pm.
working
Suggestion
Working
throught
from beginning to end
through
8 hours
canbe
Suggestion
can be
hectic and tiring which can be unprofitable some day.
Howerver
Suggestion
However
,
this
do have
Suggestion
does have
myrid
Suggestion
my rid
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
and for most
problem
Suggestion
problems
is that
business
does not give
secury
get by special effort
secure
means of you are gaining the profits you have to be ready for the losses
also
because all days are not the same.
where
Suggestion
Where
as jobs can give that
.
Accept space
.
To conclude, As what
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have seen is that
definatly
in a rebellious manner
defiantly
definitely
advantage of
business
can not
oughtweigh
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighs
outweighed
the disadvantage of it.

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