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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

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what
Suggestion
What
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 know is, in
today’era
, more people
are prefereing
Suggestion
prefer
are preferring
are preparing
 to be self
emplyoed
having your services engaged for; or having a job especially one that pays wages or a salary
employed
 than doing
job
Suggestion
the job
.
This
 has both merits and demerits. But no, as per my knowledge pros of doing
business
 not overcome the cons of it. I have
further
explaination
a statement that makes something comprehensible by describing the relevant structure or operation or circumstances etc.
explanation
explanations
expansion
 to support my answer which is mentioned below.
to
Suggestion
To
 commence with, Doing
business
 has more profits in
compare
Suggestion
comparing
to
being one more than one
two
 jobs.
Firstly
, as being self-employed
,
Accept space
,
 one can have freedom to choose work hours as per his or her
convience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
conscience
.
Thus
, person can be enthusiastic and do more work which leads to more earnings. On the opposite, If one is doing
job
Suggestion
the job
a job
, so he is bound to time as per company or office policy
thay
people in general
they
that
 have to be at work from 8 am to 4 pm.
working
Suggestion
Working
throught
from beginning to end
through
 8 hours
canbe
Suggestion
can be
 hectic and tiring which can be unprofitable some day.
Howerver
Suggestion
However
,
this
do have
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does have
myrid
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my rid
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 and for most
problem
Suggestion
problems
 is that
business
 does not give
secury
get by special effort
secure
 means of you are gaining the profits you have to be ready for the losses
also
 because all days are not the same.
where
Suggestion
Where
 as jobs can give that
.
Accept space
.
 To conclude, As what
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 have seen is that
definatly
in a rebellious manner
defiantly
definitely
 advantage of
business
 can not
oughtweigh
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighs
outweighed
 the disadvantage of it.

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