Some people believe that a significant difference between a parents age and their child's age is a good thing. Do you think the advantages of a significant age gap outweigh the disadvantages?

Dear Store Manager, I
have been
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was
a loyal
customers
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customer
for the
last
five years. I am writing
this
letter to inform you I was involved in an accident in your supermarket on 18-January-2019 3:45 pm. While I was pushing my shopping cart down the aisle by the ice-cream, I slipped on the wet
floor
. The supermarket staff came to help immediately after they heard
my
objective form of "I"
me
screaming. They were very helpful and one of the managers called 911 right after. I was sent to the hospital by the ambulance after a few minutes, and I was told my right arm was broken. As a computer technician, doctor told me that I was not able to perform any work for the
next
2 months in
this
situtation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
. The accident is preventable. The wet
floor
I believe is due to the water leaking from the broken refrigerator. The supermarket staff should check if all the machines are working every morning. They can
also
mop the
floor
immediately if there find there are water on the
floor
. For the details of the accident, you can check the
cctv
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CCTV
near the ice-cream aisle. Your Sincerely, Chun Tung

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