Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

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Globally, as computer becomes cheap and accessible to more humans the grown ups will likely choose to work from home and education system for schooling will
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be shifted to learning from home.To work from home is a very good resource for adults and
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is a very effective method to teach children with disabilities, but it can cause many serious social and physical problems in the future. Working from the comfort of
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house is a very efficient for longer hours and
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longer
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the state of being employed or having a job
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.Considering the example of a person who commutes daily 2 hours to get to work will have
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saved
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a daily basis
, which he can utilize for his social life. The children
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