As there is increasing unemployment in the world, while at the same time those who have jobs are working harder and harder, it would be better to have a four-day working week for everyone, and so to create more jobs. In what extent do you agree or disagree?

Concerned at

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the rising rate

of unemployed proportion of

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society, economists

and social scientists are becoming increasingly concerned and have been pitching for new revolutionary ways to number of jobless people. They suggest that it would viable enough if some arrangements could be made within existing capacity like reducing

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the number

of working days per

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as it would help create openings for jobless. But

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notion is strongly by many sections as they feel

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is impractical. People who support the

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of reducing

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the number

of working days per

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suggest that by stipulating 4 day

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working per person would help generate employment as employers will be forced to seek more people to compensate for workers on rest days.

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using existing set-up,

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would always be a better

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as

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will be done without governments having to plan and impose more burdens on already sulking economies. Authorities will be able to focus on other more critical economic issues that need to be solved to remove

malady

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the malady

of unemployment.

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, some sections strongly reject

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as it would impose an additional burden on employers.

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would have an adverse impact on

financial health

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the financial health

of existing employment venues as employment giving agencies will have to shell out extra money to pay salaries to new employees, bear

additional tax burden

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the additional tax burden

additional tax burdens

an additional tax burden

and additional infrastructure costs to accommodate additional workers.

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would reduce

capacity

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the capacity

of businesses to sustain profitability in

face

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the face

of stiff market

competition which

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competition, which

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result in closing down of businesses.

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would

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amplify miseries and create more jobless people. In conclusion, I strongly reject

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idea

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as enforcing a four

working day

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day working week

week

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is quite impractical as it may generate more serious issues and create more unemployed people.