Your neighbor is a musician who practices the piano during the day. Sometimes the sound of his playing causes problems for you, especially when you need to study at home. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter - Explain that the sound of his piano playing is very loud in your apartment - Describe how his practicing affects you - Suggest a solution that might work for both of you Write at least 150 words

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Dear
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Avery, I am writing
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letter in connection with the piano which is played by you during the day and is creating a problem for me. I am not against playing a
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instrument, but as I am a
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student, I am not able to concentrate while studying because of
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sound is very loud when you play it in the drawing-room because my study room wall is connected to your drawing-room wall. Owing to
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, I am not able to focus on study after
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. I have to wake
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late at night to complete the assignments. Hereby, it is impacting my health and performance at
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. It would be great if you could play it
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other end of the house so that it will not be a problem for both of us.
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, you can practice it more
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day time, as I go to
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at that time. I think, in
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way we can focus on our work without any disturbance. I look forward to a prompt and positive reply Yours sincerely, Suparna

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