Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this.

Advertising
are become
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is becoming
is become
prominent for companies to compete in the market. Some people argue that companies should not
finance sports
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finance, sports
to manipulate them as a tool for marketing, while others they believe that it is beneficial for sports. In
this
essay, I will outline both views in detail.
To begin
with, sponsorship of sports club with companies
have
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has
positive impact
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a positive impact
on both sides. The clubs secure their growth and they think to build-out infrastructure for their members.
Besides
, if clubs
becomes
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become
stronger they will definitely bring more facilities for the local people.
For instance
, Barcelona
have
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has
now different clubs across the globe which makes possible for talented people to come there to show their potential. So sports are now widespread and
it
it is
it's
vital for people’s health.
As a result
, if companies invest their money in
this
industry no only help society to have more opportunity and facility, but
also
it gives them more hope. On the flip side, there are some drawbacks exist if mutual interest
have not been defined
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has not been defined
properly. If
company
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a company
the company
just use
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just uses
clubs as a wing for their purpose and they wouldn’t care about sports responsibility, undoubtedly, it wouldn’t useful.
Also
clubs consume their sponsor‘s money for their fame, and they wouldn’t care about the community, which they
belong to
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belong, to
so the
fame
a contest with rules to determine a winner
game
have been lost in
long run
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the long run
a long run
.
For instance
, if fan
see
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sees
sponsor use their money to bring famous
sports man
someone who engages in sports
sportsman
to the club and they didn’t care about social community, undoubtedly, company image
have been lost
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has been lost
.
Thus
, clubs and companies should take it into the consideration that they have
social responsibility
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a social responsibility
against the community. To sum up, companies will get benefit if clubs do the right thing. Invest
on
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in
facility and bring more opportunity for local people. In
this
way, people will get more positive image regarding the sponsor. But,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sports sponsorship
  • financial support
  • athletes
  • brand visibility
  • awareness
  • commercialization
  • integrity
  • dependencies
  • corporate funds
  • unethical practices
  • strategic partnerships
  • communal relations
  • promote healthy lifestyles
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