Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is evitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It’s argued that

traveler

a person who changes location

traveller

impact negatively to the

culture

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a particular place

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and they should be prevented from that certain areas. While I believe that the voyager do contribute in damaging the

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of the local

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, I disagree the idea that tourists shall be completely

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removed

for preserving the

culture

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. On one hand, the

travelers

a person who changes location

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travels

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usually aren’t

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respected

and regard to the

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where they visit for temper time. They sightsee the attractions and turn that

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into a polluted

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by littering, drawing graffiti, even having urine inappropriate

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. Not only leaving the harmful things which ruin the environment, the sightseers

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act

against the style of the local thoughts and

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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since the custom are various in different places. They dress up in

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an improper way

improper ways

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, they are loud and

noisy making

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noisy, making

the local people uncomfortable and annoyed. The strangers to people’s home lands may lead to a significant consequence that the native people would move away from their lovely home areas.

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, I believe that tourists are not the main reason for the worse local

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and

they

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even benefit to the economy of the places. The

travelers

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travellers

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may affect negatively the

attractions but

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attractions, but

the local

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take part in damaging the

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since some of them are littering, overusing the limit natural material taking

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advantage

of the

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.

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, the

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is the indispensable source of income for a local

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. People have businesses in food, clothes and souvenirs industries.

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, travelling improve the world perspective since they can experience new cultures, broaden the horizon with new things and think under the other points of view when interact with the ranges of people from different areas.

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, banning people from

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to some areas is not the best

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to protect the local area since

tourism

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is advantageous and we can seek for the new measurements with some rules limiting the

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

. In conclusion, tourist

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spoils

the particular cultures but I would argue that preventing

tourism

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is not an efficient

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to solve the problem and even produce disadvantages for the economy.