Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The question of spending

money

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on the

construction

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or

renovting

restore to a previous or better condition

renovating

public buildings depends upon various factors. These factors

consists

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consist

of the budget, availability of

land

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incase

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in the case

in case

of the

construction

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of new building and

lastly

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the

neccessity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

. Considering all these factors I think that renovating existing public buildings is a better way to spend

money

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rather than creating a new one. I believe that the

foresaid

being the one previously mentioned or spoken of

aforesaid

idea has more advantage than its counterpart. When it comes to renovating

existing buildings it

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existing buildings, it

does not

points

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point

out the frugality of the

authorities but

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authorities, but

it is the efficient way of spending

money

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by authorities. It is no doubt the simple renovation cost less than half than constructing a new building.

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Moreover tourists

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Moreover, tourists

are most likely to visit old buildings with heritage has always been a great source of income to the

torism

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

sector. The Notre

dame

informal term for a (young) woman

Dame

of Paris is a great example of

such

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buildings since it is equally visited

b

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be

the the

definite article

the

same number of people who visit the Eiffel tower. The availability of

land

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for the

construction

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of new buildings is a good question that follows.

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buildings must be built at the heart of the

region but

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region, but

there might not be any space available in

city centre

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the city centre

. Since it requires

large area

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large areas

a large area

of

land

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and acquiring it may require a hefty amount of

money

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Neccessity

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The necessity

Necessity

of building it plays a major role because simply constructing a new public building must have a compelling reason

backong

the act of providing approval and support

backing

baking

packing

it. Only regions requiring tourist attractions and newly developed cities may need new

ublic

not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole

public

buildings. If old public buildings are taken into account there were reasons for building it.

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the Louvre museum in Paris was constructed to showcase the great artworks done by the artists belonging to their country. To sum up the idea of spending

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towards renovating existing public buildings overshadows the

construction

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of new ones. It is due to the fact that the advantages of renovation

overweighs

in other respects or ways

otherwise

the concept of new

consruction

the act of constructing something

construction

, these

advantages mainly

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advantages, mainly

falls in the vies of finance,

land

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availability and

neccesity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

. So I strongly place my views on the aspect of renovating old public buildings rather than constructing a new one.