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Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Reading help people to improve their educational skills and it
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so enhance l
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also enhances
has also enhanced
earning and understanding power of an individual while videos or televisions do not do sa
me thing.
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the same thing
In my opinion, reading skills and watching videos or television both are great for improving educational skills.
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 of all, with the help of reading people learn theoretical part of any subject and it become very easy to un
derstande t
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
he things, which might be help them to increase their thinking power and improve their reading skills.
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, while reading people come across new words and new theory which va
sts t
put or send forth
casts
boosts
wastes
heir knowledge and open their minds fo
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to
hink deeply. In
this
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 way, people become more ed
ucate a
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educated
nd smart in terms of learning and understanding the things, which is a helpful for people in many ways in the improvement in education.
In contrast
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, educational videos and watching some educational and knowledgeable channels on television
such
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 as topper, national geographic channel, which are extremely helpful for people to learn something new with some animations and with audio. Learning with the help of these things ar
e i
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is
ncrease individuals learning power when they watch or listen to the things,
also
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 st
udying watching v
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studying, watching
ideo with audio are good and in
this
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 way people do not feel bo
re w
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bored
hile learning. They easily understand the things and become intelligence persons. All in all, gaining ed
ucation f
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an education
rom reading books and videos or televisions are both very effective methods. They both help to improve the knowledge and understanding of people.

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