Question: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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There are so many sports are there in the world like cricket, hockey, football, archery, chess and so on. Today's young generation is not only interested in
study
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the study
, but they have
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started to
shows
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show
interest in
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sport
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sports
the sport
too. Many youngsters are participating in
compititions
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competitions
competition
held at state and national level. Spending more
time
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on
sport
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is good for thos who want to be a sportsman and make their career in
sport
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only. On seeing the good side of the games, it makes us strong and healthy too. You have to be physically fit all
time
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. You need to be a quick learner and good decision makers as well. Exercise on a daily basis and eat healthy food. You have to be an expert in any single game,
then
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only you can be part of the national team. You will perform better and better by practicing more and more and for that you have to spend
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a big portion
of your
time
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. Bad side of using
lot
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a lot
of
time
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on the game, you are getting tired and if you are not good enough in
game
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the game
, you will be thrown out of the court. So you have to give best, you
can not
can not
cannot
attend social functions. I still remember that my
cousine
the child of your aunt or uncle
cousin
brother was not
come
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coming
in
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to
my wedding due to he has a match in England. So choosing a
sport
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is a good
decision but
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decision, but
also
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make sure that if you are not good, it's not for you, choose any other option as your career.

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