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Question: Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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There are so many sports are there in the world like cricket, hockey, football, archery, chess and so on. Today's young generation is not only interested in
study
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the study
, but they have
also
 started to
shows
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show
 interest in
sport
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sports
the sport
 too. Many youngsters are participating in
compititions
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competitions
competition
 held at state and national level. Spending more
time
 on
sport
 is good for thos who want to be a sportsman and make their career in
sport
 only. On seeing the good side of the games, it makes us strong and healthy too. You have to be physically fit all
time
. You need to be a quick learner and good decision makers as well. Exercise on a daily basis and eat healthy food. You have to be an expert in any single game,
then
 only you can be part of the national team. You will perform better and better by practicing more and more and for that you have to spend
big portion
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a big portion
 of your
time
. Bad side of using
lot
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a lot
 of
time
 on the game, you are getting tired and if you are not good enough in
game
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the game
, you will be thrown out of the court. So you have to give best, you
can not
can not
cannot
 attend social functions. I still remember that my
cousine
the child of your aunt or uncle
cousin
 brother was not
come
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coming
in
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to
 my wedding due to he has a match in England. So choosing a
sport
 is a good
decision but
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decision, but
also
 make sure that if you are not good, it's not for you, choose any other option as your career.

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