Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do agree or Disagree?

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Everything has a solution if we find similarities
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of preventing
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change, we need to find a
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to live with it.Now a day, global warming becomes the current problem due to which
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changes have been seen drastically. Pollution is the main cause of
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changes
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Deforestation is
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the main matter of concern.So
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there are numerous factors Responsible for the weather change and the whole credit goes to the human beings. I totally disagree, with the above statement.
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of all, we should try to prevent
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changes not to find a
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to live with it.It can be explained in a better
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with examples. When a
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is born in a family, everyone in the family welcomes the
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in one
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or every
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try to make the
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happy in every
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, the
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grows and becomes demanding it doesn'
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matter whether the demands are genuine but parents fulfilled it Because they want their
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to be happy. They
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find a
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to make him no.
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treat the plants like our children, but what we do we cut them for the sake of rising up, the industries
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Many forests has been destructed due to the negligence of the humans for their personal benefits due to which no. Of problems has been rising
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like pollution
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global warming
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health issues e.
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.c. In spite of all these problems, no one tries to treat the main cause
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they are using artificial ways, to cope up with the
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changes. If we
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want our generations to be healthy, we have to plant more and more trees, so that the ecological balance will be maintained. We should treat the plants as God
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as they are only the source of survival.If, they don'
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exist, we do not survive.If oxygen is not available, how can we survive.Some people find a
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to live with
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changes
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but in reality they don'
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find a
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to live if plants are not there.Furthermost
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I concluded my statement with the old and best saying"Nature is the god precious gift". It is the duty of every person to care of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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