igital communication technology, such as email. instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Although
many would argue that
technology
has cr
eate a
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created
gap between generations, I think it has filled many gaps in communication between masses. I somehow agree with the fact that it has taken over most of our ho
urs,
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hour
in spite of
this
aspect i
t
refers to the speaker or writer
I
otally support advancement. If I talk about emails, it has become th
e most fastest a
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the fastest
nd reliable source of communication in co
rporate world.
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the corporate world
It is
time
saving and at the same
time
it does not require any efforts but power and internet connection.
On the other hand
in early ages
this
work was done by letter writing and later by sending fa
x.
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faxes
a fax
In contrast
with email both the processes required much more
time
and energy. Sending letter needs manpower, writing efforts, and a proper post-office system. As far as for email, we only need a laptop or a cell phone with internet connection. Instant messaging and social media has helped many people around the globe to talk to each other in a more efficient way. I believe it has le
ssen t
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lessened
he distance between families living far away from home. I have seen many people finding their lost friends and fa
mily social m
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family, social
edia
such
as Facebook and in
stagram.
Messaging is another easiest way to connect with re
spective person t
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the respective person
o inquire about something or to send information about yourself. Before the
technology
era people have faced many difficulties in conveying some important news to the other person who lived far away from the native country or city. I have an example of my own family. My father used to live abroad due to his job. When my grandfather died, my father wasn't there with his family, there was no af
fective c
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
ommunication system exist back in early 80's. My mother se
nd h
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sends
im a letter which reached to him almost half a month later, and due to that he missed the significant moment of his father's funeral which he regret till the date. In the en
d i w
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end, I
end I
ould like to state that
technology
has helped us in many ways, it contributes in making people more social and confident. It helps us sa
ving
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save
to save
time
and energy that we can use in
somewhere else.
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somewhere else
Our generation ha
ve become m
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has become
ore productive in corporate and business sector, it helped in de
veloping economy.
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developing economies
the developing economy
Students are benefited through the use of computers and internet. For me it
s a
it is
it's
positive change in the world by spreading
technology
all over.
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