igital communication technology, such as email. instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Although
many would argue that Linking Words
technology
has crUse synonyms
eate a
gap between generations, I think it has filled many gaps in communication between masses. I somehow agree with the fact that it has taken over most of our hoSuggestion
created
urs,
in spite of Suggestion
hour
this
aspect i Linking Words
t
otally support advancement.
If I talk about emails, it has become threfers to the speaker or writer
I
e most fastest a
nd reliable source of communication in coSuggestion
the fastest
rporate world.
It is Suggestion
the corporate world
time
saving and at the same Use synonyms
time
it does not require any efforts but power and internet connection. Use synonyms
On the other hand
in early ages Linking Words
this
work was done by letter writing and later by sending faLinking Words
x.
Suggestion
faxes
a fax
In contrast
with email both the processes required much more Linking Words
time
and energy. Sending letter needs manpower, writing efforts, and a proper post-office system. As far as for email, we only need a laptop or a cell phone with internet connection.
Instant messaging and social media has helped many people around the globe to talk to each other in a more efficient way. I believe it has leUse synonyms
ssen t
he distance between families living far away from home. I have seen many people finding their lost friends and faSuggestion
lessened
mily social m
edia Accept comma addition
family, social
such
as Facebook and inLinking Words
stagram.
Messaging is another easiest way to connect with reSuggestion
spective person t
o inquire about something or to send information about yourself.
Before the Suggestion
the respective person
technology
era people have faced many difficulties in conveying some important news to the other person who lived far away from the native country or city. I have an example of my own family. My father used to live abroad due to his job. When my grandfather died, my father wasn't there with his family, there was no afUse synonyms
fective c
ommunication system exist back in early 80's. My mother seproducing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
nd h
im a letter which reached to him almost half a month later, and due to that he missed the significant moment of his father's funeral which he regret till the date.
In the enSuggestion
sends
d i w
ould like to state that Accept comma addition
end, I
end I
technology
has helped us in many ways, it contributes in making people more social and confident. It helps us saUse synonyms
ving
Suggestion
save
to save
time
and energy that we can use inUse synonyms
somewhere else.
Our generation haSuggestion
somewhere else
ve become m
ore productive in corporate and business sector, it helped in deSuggestion
has become
veloping economy.
Students are benefited through the use of computers and internet. For me itSuggestion
developing economies
the developing economy
s a
positive change in the world by spreading it is
it's
technology
all over.Use synonyms
Submitted by sukhsidhudeep123 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.