Nowadays media is paying a lot of attention to life stories of famous people in fields such as cinema, sports and modeling. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

In recent times, more people are interested in following famous and rich celebrities. Nowadays, all media like newspapers and magazines are writing more on the well-established people with common backgrounds. Developing more and more people's interest in
lives
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the lives
of rich and famous people and competition to survive in
media world
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the media world
are
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is
the main reason behind
this
trend. In my opinion, following successful people and reading about them is definitely
good thing
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a good thing
as it motivates others to follow and achieve their dreams.
This
essay will discuss the reason for increasing interest in famous people and will share
opinion
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an opinion
the opinion
opinions
.
To begin
with,
first
and foremost reason is due to
introduction
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the introduction
of different online mediums like social media site, which have given access to common people to follow the celebrities and successful people.
In other words
, people can connect with them directly, which was never the case in earlier times.
In addition
, these celebrities share their life stories and experiences online which common people can relate to.
Moreover
, they can follow their role models and communicate with them online and get their
advices
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advice
.
For example
,
social media forum
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a social media forum
social media forums
like Instagram and Twitter, where Indian Prime Minister, a public
figures
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figure
put his thoughts, request and comments and people in turn can ask questions directly to him, which was not possible in earlier days.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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