The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The pie charts show the
energy
consumption of Australian household and their respective Use synonyms
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greenhouse
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gas emissions.
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Overall
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whereas
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greenhouse
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gas emissions are Use synonyms
due to
water heating.
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energy
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household
is for heating which is 42% which produces 15% of the total Fix the agreement mistake
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greenhouse
house
gases followed by water heating at 30% and other appliances at 15% which in turn produces 32% and 28% of the Use synonyms
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greenhouse
house
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Refrigration
is the Correct your spelling
Refrigeration
next
most used Linking Words
energy
with 7% succeded by lighting and cooling with 4% and 2% respectively.
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Refrigration
produces 14% of the Correct your spelling
Refrigeration
green
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greenhouse
house
gases Use synonyms
while
lighting and cooling produce 8% and 3% respectively.Linking Words
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