Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

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this
sophisticated era
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,
work
and
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
are
extremly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
inevitable for earning "bread and butter" because, most of the people running behind
this
. Most of the people are busy in their
work
,
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,
so they feel very tired and
stress
on
mind
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the mind
. There are
also
some major problems associated with these overwork and
also
there are some effective remedies. On the one side
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individuals are
tenst
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tensed
about any problem related to their family
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,
because they want to give better facilities to them and
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put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
the desire of their
family specialy
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family, especially
family especially
family specially
family special
children, as well as, improve the living standard and income level
,
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,
thus
, they are in
stress
.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, large
burdon
an onerous or difficult concern
burden
of their
work
is the major reason of
stress
because, due
this
,
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,
they
of them or themselves
their
faces some
phychomatic
problems and diseases.
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For
instance
headach
something or someone that causes anxiety; a source of unhappiness
headache
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mentally stressed and so on. These effects are
irrevesable
incapable of being reversed
irreversible
. On the flip side
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if they spend more time with their family
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an acknowledgment of appreciation
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takes
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they can make strong relation as well as
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they watch the movie together and listen music. These
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sources
of entertainment are
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working
as
stress buster
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a stress buster
stress busters
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tour, at
weekend
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the weekend
weekends
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and good quality of air
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makes
to human perfectly well and physically fit.
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In spite
of it, morning walk and exercise are
make
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made
to fit and healthy and active to every one. In conclusion, it can be noted that
this
is a problem that has both physical and social
effect
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effects
, and effective solution require, if more and more people do
work
by
mannually
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manual
manually
way and free on
weekend
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a weekend
the weekend
weekends
, the better it is.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment
  • financial instability
  • social safety nets
  • constant connectivity
  • work-life balance
  • remote work
  • social isolation
  • community support
  • chronic illnesses
  • affordable healthcare
  • public health campaigns
  • mental well-being
  • high-stakes testing
  • holistic education
  • flexible working hours
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