Some people believe that is good idea to express the point of view and ideas through social media however other believe opposite do you agree or disagree

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a better thought
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The
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society
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society
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have no time to travel
o far in
this
matter social media had them
for example
, greeting Diwali through social media is one of the most popular medium.That st
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the army
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the social media side
Despite of
this
, there are some drawbacks of social media
first
and foremost is that some people of the
society
spread some rumours by posting ca
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caste, community
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result, there
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keeping
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this
type of people.
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so
this
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the government
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the perennial nuisance
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by doing
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it ultimately our lots of people.
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