Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In bad situations, the option to improve or accept the status quo is debatable, Some people are of the opinion that there's no point trying to change an already bad position while others have a contrary view.
This
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essay will look at both sides of the divide and explain why it is important to improve on a
sitituation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
no matter how terrible it might look. The fear of failure is the main reason why people will choose to remain in a bad
situation
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instead
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of making
concious
intentionally conceived
conscious
efforts to come out of the pit. There's often an
uncertainess
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that go with
tryng
hard to endure
trying
something new and the saying that " a bird
at
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in
hand is worth than two in the bush'
further
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explains
this
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.
some
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Some
individuals will choose to accept their present standards so as not to get caught in the web of failure from trying out something new.
For example
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The people of Ogba in Edo state, Nigeria have refused to step
into
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in
development as they that moving into something new, will contaminate their culture and
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they prefer to continue with their primitive lifestyle.
Conversely
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, A school of thought believes that things could grow worse if no attempt is made to change the existing
situation
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,
hence
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to a have a chance of having an improved life, some individuals
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
belief
that it is better to make an attempt towards getting out of a negative
situation
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. They often argue that 'no venture, no gain"
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, you could grow bored
from
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of
doing the same thing without making an
attempt launch
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attempt to launch
into greater heights. Persons in
this
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category will say that the beauty of life lies in
variety
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a variety
the variety
of activities available.
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doing a single thing daily all
though
by means of; with aid of; through the act or agency of; "destroyed by fire"
through
one's life can
lead boredom
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lead to boredom
.
Coclusively
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Conclusively
, having examined both options on whether to choose to remain in a bad
situation
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or try
make
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to make
changes, I will prefer trying to improve one's
situation
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as I believe that "
the greatest
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the great
room in the world is the room for improvement".
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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