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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The death toll numbers on our roads have been increasing year on year basis. Some people believe that
tough
Suggestion
tougher
 rules must be implemented on teens like to have an eligibility
age
 of 24 and over to drive, whilst other people believe that teen should be educated on effects of rash and drink driving
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which are one of the major causes of death on the road). I believe that setting an
age
 limit
on
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for
 teens is not the solution and in
this
 essay, we discuss how can find alternatives to
this
 problem. There should be an
age
 limit to when a teen can start riding a motorcycle, but rather than having them to learn a new skill later on in life, it can be productive to let them learn from 16-18 years of
age
 with a learner
license
 with several restrictions.
Also having
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Also, having
 various stages before getting a full
license
 and heavy penalties for breaking any rules would be a positive way for a teenager to learn from is
mistakes
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mistaken
 or to avoid mistakes overall.
For example
, a teen in Australia has to go through four stages of the
license
 before he can apply for a full
license
, these stages run over
four year period
Suggestion
a four year period
 and have a severe penalty if the rules are not followed according to the stage. Another way the government can help reduce the number of teen fatalities on the motorcycle is by educating them through ads. Placing the ads in an educational institute and on the roads can create awareness amongst the youth of
consequences
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the consequences
 of drink driving and rash driving.
For example
, New Zeeland government is placing advertisements on television, radio and the internet by showing how
accident victim
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the accident victim
 regrets dangerous driving. Overall, I firmly believe, that rather than stopping teens from driving a motorcycle, we should implement a tougher procedure to obtain a
license
 as well as creating awareness amongst the youth on
positives
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the positives
 of safe driving.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • road safety
  • traffic fatalities
  • risk perception
  • graduated licensing
  • enforceable legislation
  • statistical correlation
  • demographic analysis
  • adolescent development
  • age discrimination
  • public transportation
  • driving prohibition
  • legal restrictions
  • vehicular accidents
  • rash driving
  • defensive driving
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