Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that recent
days
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day
consumer
products have more popular and useful in our lives as well as its become more importance goods in our everyday
life
.
However
,
consumer
product
make
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makes
our
life
more easier
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easier
more easy
and save our
time
.In my opinion
,
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,
consumer
products need every
people
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person
for
survive
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surviving
their
life
because it's become very dependable products in our daily
time
.
Firstly
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Firstly, consumer
consumer
goods is very essential in our
life
.Because
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
consumer
products make our
life
much easier and it's
save
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saved
our daily
time
,
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,
also
consumer
goods
is
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are
very helpful and useful.
For example
soap
,
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,
shampoo
,
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,
hand wash
,
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,
toothpaste etc
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toothpaste, etc.
toothpaste etc.
this
types
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type
of goods
help
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helps
us because in our working
time
we do many
kind
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kinds
of work and we attacked by bacteria
,
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,
if we use
this
type of goods
then
we save our
life
from bacteria
,
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,
because bacteria carrying many harmful
disease
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diseases
.
In
addition
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addition, consumer
consumer
goods have many
quality
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qualities
,
such
as packet food
,
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,
drinks
,
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,
cosmetics
,
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,
electronics good etc.All types of product
is
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are
very important in our daily
life
because it very helpful and useful
Secondly
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Secondly, consumer
consumer
goods make us very
lezy
moving slowly and gently
lazy
lacy
,
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,
because
consumer
product use is very easy and save our
time
and energy
,
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,
that's why we don't work
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
much and at the moment we feel
laziness
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lazy
.
Additionally
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Additionally, consumer
consumer
goods
is
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are
very
expensive that's
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expensive, that's
why many people can't afford all types of goods cost

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mass production
  • consumerism
  • economic growth
  • environmental degradation
  • natural resources
  • overconsumption
  • waste management
  • landfill
  • social inequality
  • materialism
  • financial strain
  • mental well-being
  • quality of life
  • job creation
  • productivity
  • pollution
  • deforestation
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