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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Being eminent is always appealing. Having a fancy
life
, stylish clothes,
comfortable fast
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comfortable, fast
 cars, luxury houses,
first
 class travels and most of all being in the news publicity makes everyone curious about celebrities’ lives.
However
, an enormous amount of curiosity can be detrimental to the
privacy
 of a celebrity. When people have chosen to live in
this
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, they know how hard and
unsafe it
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unsafe, it
 might be and
also
 how being in the public spotlight affects their lives.
Besides
, they learn about
lack
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the lack
 of security and little or no confidentiality. In the past few decades celebrities’
privacy
 has become a prevalent topic.
Therefore
, it needs more consideration. Almost every day the internet and the mass media are visited by famous people’s fans. With only few clicks fans can find out about celebrities' lives. But how much of
this
 news should be allowed to be published. They are aware of unstable
privacy
 and security and having no secret in their lives and they have accepted to live in
this
 way.
On the other hand
, celebrities should respect their fans’ curiosity and share some news about their lives and works. At the end, all people in every condition have a right to live freely and have
privacy
 and secrets of their own. It is true that celebrities lead a good
life
 out of media
attention but
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attention, but
 their
privacy
 should not be violated,
although
 they should be convinced of
difficulties
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the difficulties
 and problems of
this
 career.
In other words
, they can aid in preventing the aspects of their
life
 by learning to act like a professional and reduce unexpected
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
.

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