The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, the enormous development in science and technology has led

to establish

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to establishing

the online shopping portals resulting in diminishing the shops (specifically the smaller ones) in towns and cities.

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, the impression that the shops will be fully closed in the future is not realistic. On

this

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basis, I strongly disagree with the opinion that

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taking place or located at the site

on-site

ancient

markets are becoming fully depleted despite the popularization of online shopping. It is held belief that the use of information technology and communication devices has now become so eminent that people cannot resist using them for daily life purposes,

such

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as shopping. Some people think that buying the

stuffs

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stuff

online is more convenient and useful because they do not need to spend a lot time in selecting them in the market. They

also

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think that online shopping saves significant time that we spend during transportation from home to the market. Meanwhile, online shopping in some countries has now

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become a part of their culture.

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, according to a report published in “The daily news”, more than 60% people in China and India prefer online shopping over conventional.

On the other hand

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traditional way

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the traditional way

of purchasing good is still very famous in many countries

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as Germany, Sweden and England. People in these countries believe that

traditional shopping

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the traditional shopping

give

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gives

more mental and physical relaxation. Some even consider it as a family day-out. The percentage of only 10% (as published by European Journal), of the people who prefer online shopping, is extremely low to their above mentioned counterpart.

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suggests that the traditional way of shopping will survive even though the extreme popularity of online shopping is on the way. In my opinion, the

onsite

taking place or located at the site

on-site

purchase is more beneficial as it brings the family member and friend closer to each other.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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297 words

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e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
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showrooms
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people with good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What problems does this cause?

Student should pay the full cost for their study because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that when deciding how taxes are spent, government should prioritize health care. Others think that there are more important priorities for tax-payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your