Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent pdo you agree or disagree?

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Some people’s opinions that authorities are in charge of environmental protection and every citizen should not take
this
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responsibility as they are not able to change anything. I completely agree
this
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claim,
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however I
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however, I
also
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believe
in that individuals should
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that individuals should
take action in their range. On the one hand,
authorities
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the authorities
must take action to protect
Use synonyms
environment
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the environment
and
this
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is their main responsibility as they have people, system, power and the attention of citizens in a country. America is
good example
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a good example
for
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of
this
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fact. In terms of people,
US president
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a US president
the US president
are
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is
able to rally top specialists in any field for consulting. In terms of
system
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the system
, he or federal government has a lot of state governments, which prepare and implement upcoming policies. In terms of power, he and his employee like
vice president
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a vice president
the vice president
, every secretary can change related environmental issues
such
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opening investigation or shutting down companies, organizations or people in US land, which is on the list of potential harming
surrounded
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surrounding
environment
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, or spend a large budget to clean up specific areas and recover burning forests. On
other hand
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the other hand
, I believe that
individual
Suggestion
individuals
the individual
an individual
should do some things in their range for our
environment
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.
Firstly
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, a person is aware and always do stuff for environmental protection, if one day he or she may become a
politicians
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politician
or any high position in governments, it would be extremely helpful
.
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.
Secondly
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, individuals only can do some tiny things
such
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as do not litter on
streets
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the streets
or use
gum but
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gum, but
it
change
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changes
completely a country and Singapore is a good example. From
this
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point, we can
confirm certainly
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certainly confirm
that one person
do
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does
right thing
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the right thing
, the result is nothing, but all people do
right thing
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the right thing
, the result is massive. In conclusion, I
emphasis
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emphasize
emphasized
that the responsibility of protecting our
environment
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belongs to individuals and politicians as some reason mentioned above.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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